Gallant wind blowing your worries away
Under the rays of the full Moon
Crying your souls desires in the night
Wishing for a better life
The stars are moving around the Moon
Showing you the path which you should follow
It all changes on the surface
Both you and the Moon are covered in flowers
Following the path you fell
Now you are under the Moonlight again
But you are not alone
You don’t have a life anymore.
I like how in essence you have made the Moon be almost a living entity. See the moon is just a mass that illuminates due the reflection of the sun but in this poem it’s almost alive. I enjoyed reading this. You should keep writing.
Thank you for reading. I am glad to hear that you enjoyed reading my
poem, it means the world to me if someone likes one of my writings
I will continue to write. Thank you for the motivation.