Don’t die young

Since you gone, I just feel I am not in the zone,
I tried to make it last, I drunk so much when you passed,
You died young, you left all the family crying,
Made me feel like dying, I wanted to visit you,
Know that I am still good, you know how I do,
Rest brother, rest well, because when I get there, I’ll turn heaven to hell,
I can’t let them be, I mean they took you away from me,
Gods plan, damn son, I don’t think that’s the right way,
I never send no one my plan, so there can’t be one,
Aight, until I get free I’ll do what you told me,
You know I am still writing, I am still grinding,
I still work out, I still pour my heart on the court, all out boy,
And you know how much it hurts, it hurts like hell, but whatever,
I never did so well, I never was as close to heaven as I was to hell,
So if you are up there, watch your boy, cuz whatever I do, it’s still me and you,
Still not used to the life without you, me and you no truer two,
Rest fool, don’t worry, you know I am strong, you know I will come  up to you,
One day, one day again,  me and you, the truest two, the freaking truest two.


Responses

  1. Cristina Avatar
    Cristina

    Touching and beautiful…

  2. Ravyne Avatar
    Ravyne

    Heartfelt with raw emotional pain… love all of the internal Rhymes and the themes of death, living and Heaven & Hell

    1. Srdjan Solkotovic Avatar
      Srdjan Solkotovic

      Thank you a lot 🙂 I am glad you enjoyed it, I hope to write a few more soon enough 😀

      1. Cristina Avatar
        Cristina

        I’m keeping an eye on you for more 🙂

        1. Carl D'Agostino Avatar
          Carl D’Agostino

          You strike hard just being present here Cristina for this topic. You see my daughter,32, is on what might be her final death run on crack cocaine right now. I hope she doesn’t die this time. Her name is Cristina.

          1. Srdjan Solkotovic Avatar
            Srdjan Solkotovic

            I am sorry to hear that Carl, I hope she will find the strength to battle through that period and see the beauty of her world with her own eyes.

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