Beware of the dog

Begging for love but the silence can’t reach us
A dog watching from the side of the street
Beware , beware of the dog it wants to eat your soul
Don’t look him in the eyes or your heart will melt like ice
No one is immune to the curse of that little fur ball
But if you don’t hear or see him at all its easier for you
Passing by like its got nothing to do with you
But it does and that’s why you can’t look him in the eyes
While you have food and a home , it is all alone
Beware the dog , the soul eating dog
His looks melt your heart , because it is turned into ice
Ice coldย  you don’t look right or left just in front
That’s why you can’t and don’t want to see this worlds cruelty.


Responses

  1. Claraviolet Avatar
    Claraviolet

    That’s some great piece,solkotovic!

    The rhyming and the usage of words is pretty good.Now,I am feeling down(a little),after reading the poem and the words “all alone”.There are so many pets and people out there,who don’t have any home to go back to ๐Ÿ™

    1. Srdjan Solkotovic Avatar
      Srdjan Solkotovic

      Ah sorry that it had such an effect on you. I am glad that you read it and commented though ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜€

      1. Claraviolet Avatar
        Claraviolet

        You don’t have to be sorry about anything.It just shows how it captured my heart, for a second ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Still,I have to admit.. you’ve talent for this solkotovic! Why don’ you try sending some of your work to some publishing company?

        1. Srdjan Solkotovic Avatar
          Srdjan Solkotovic

          There are a few books in work . Two Erotica books, one collaboration and one self published, one poetry book and one fantasy fiction book. I hope to be able to sort out things in my life and I hope that in 2015 I will have one of those published ๐Ÿ™‚
          Thanks for the support ๐Ÿ˜€ .

          1. Claraviolet Avatar
            Claraviolet

            Whoa there..for real?

            Don’t forget us when you become super famous ๐Ÿ˜‰
            Anyway,would you mind sharing some of your works with us.I wouldn’t mind reading your works at all, solkotovic ๐Ÿ˜€

          2. Srdjan Solkotovic Avatar
            Srdjan Solkotovic

            I already been famous as a basketball player I don’t forget people dont worry ๐Ÿ˜‰ . There are some stories and poems in the story and poems category of this site ๐Ÿ˜€

  2. MisaTange Avatar
    MisaTange

    This suddenly makes me wonder if my (dead) dog is up there doing this in dog heaven.

    1. Srdjan Solkotovic Avatar
      Srdjan Solkotovic

      He sure is in a better place. The pope recently said that dogs go to heaven.

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